Essay Rubric: Minimum Criteria for Grading (don't submit until these have been met) _____ 1. MLA Format (4 lines, exact) _____ 2. Double Spaced (formatted--no hard returns)
Explanatory Figurative Language Essay Topic: detail a search for something positive (something beautiful, courageous, fun, interesting, attractive, breathtaking, incredible, loving,, etc.). Prewrite: read the book Something Beautiful (in-class power point). Assignment: Write a 1.5 page essay meeting minimum criteria on the different definitions of one of the traits above (or an adjective of your choice).. Minimum of at least three perspectives (three interviews) and three examples for each of the three perspectives (minimum five paragraphs). Must include three figurative devices UNDERLINED! Objectives/I CANs: Recognize we see the world differently--even commonly defined terms. Reflect on what is valuable to you, and what is not. Organize a 5-paragraph essay (three traits sandwiched between a solid intro and solid conclusion). Show competency on Google Docs, write/submit grade level narrative paper on time, in MLA format. Use figurative language in creative writing Paragraph #1) Introduction (hook with thesis, transition) Paragraph #2) Define trait and give three examples/evidences Paragraph #3) Define the same trait from a different perspective and give three examples/evidences Paragraph #4) Define the same trait from a third perspective and give three examples/evidences Paragraph #5 Conclusion--include reflection, why it matters Explanatory Essay Civil Rights Movement Topic: The Civil Rights Movement Brainstorming/Background: Read Nightjohn; saw in-class video on history, leaders and events of The Civil Rights Movement (took notes); reading "The Watsons Go to Birmingham" Assignment: Write a 1.5 page essay meeting minimum criteria. showing competency in I CAN assessments listed below. Use imagery in a hook with a scenario or reflection; 3 part thesis, color coded to match body paragraphs, conclusion with summary and analysis, Minimum 3 intext citations; Works Cited page with URLs Objectives/I CANs: 1--W8.2a, 2--W82.b, 3--W8.2c, 4--W8.2d, 5--L8.3a, 6--W8.4.d, 7--W8.5, 8--W8.6, 9--L8.2, 10--W8.8 Important! Essays receive points for a many aspects including those listed above, pre-planning (outlining, brainstorming, collaborating, etc.), the writing itself, and "I CAN" skills from the Core. “I CAN” Key: 1--minimal, 2--almost, 3--adequate, 4--effective Due Dates 9/24/14 Computer Lab Notes (8 steps; must follow exactly; points are all or nothing) 9/25-30 in computer lab Researching and writing 3 body paragraphs (historical background, leaders, events during) about the Civil Rights Movement (3-4 days) 10/1/14 3 Body Paragraphs going from general (from the movie clip) to specific, using evidence/details from personal research (URLs cut and pasted on Works Cited page), rubric, outline, movie notes 10/10/14 Corrections on 3 body paragraphs; SIS scores (send me an EMAIL once it's ready for me to look at again): 0 Not shared correctly (I can't access it to grade) 1 almost, but not quite; needs more before grading; can get full points once fixed (see my comments on essay) 2 shared but not finished. Can still get 50% of the points on this part of the assignment 10/10/14 Intro paragraph with reflection or scenario hook using imagery (see examples below and on attached pages), 3-part thesis statement, color-coded to correspond with the parts/paragraphs; header (last name and page #). 10/20/14 Conclusion with transition, summary of thesis and essay, answering the question "so what?" why is it important (reflection/analysis). Works Cited page with URLs (where they researched). At least 3 in-text citations. Points for Essay Assignments: 10 pts Followed Lab Notes 5 pts In-class Movie notes (must SEE movie to use/count it as a reference) 10 pts Completed Outline 5 pts Rubric in on time 10/1 40 pts 3 body paragraphs/parts. General info based on in-class movie notes, ending with specifics on two different items (evidence/details) in each part, based on personal research. URLs cut and pasted on bottom of the page. 1 part/paragraph--history leading up to Civil Rights Movement (such as slavery, Civil War, formation of KKK, Plessy vs. Ferguson, segregation, etc.) 2 part/paragraph--Civil Rights Movement leaders (such as MLK, Malcolm X, Rosa Parks, Robert & JFK, NAACP, etc.) 3 part/paragraph--Events DURING the Civil Rights Movement (such as Jackie Robinson, Brown vs. Board of Education; March on Washington, Freedom Riders, Montgomery Bus Boycott, Birmingham School Bombing, Little Rock 9, etc.) 15 pts Introductory Part/Paragraph with imagery and 3-part thesis; color-coded; header 15 pts Conclusion Part/Paragraph with transition, summary, answering the question "so what?" with analysis page break before Works Cited Page; at least 3 intext citations 40-80 pts I CAN skills (10) PASSING THESE SKILLS--see Blue Rubric-- IS THE OBJECTIVE 140-180 Points total (10 affiliated tests/I CANs) Helpful Resource! See Examples of this year's PJHS student papers (except conclusion) at the bottom of this page: #5 Civil Rights Movement Also Sample Introduction and First Paragraph Kelsey White Hoffman English 1, The Civil Rights Movement October 7, 2014 title Part/Paragraph 1, Introduction including reflection or scenario hook with imagery, and the color-coded thesis statement: Part/Paragraph 2, part 1 of the thesis statement, background/historical events leading to The Civil Rights Movement: The history of slavery in America set the stage for black oppression. In the 1600s, shortly after the first permanent English settlements in America, slave traders ravaged the coasts of Africa, stealing black natives who brought them hundreds of dollars on the block in places like North Carolina and Virginia. It was an inhumane beginning. About 100 years later, Americans fiercely fought each other in the Civil War--a war between the northern and southern states--to end the inequality and abuse. There is no question that white people--depending on geography, religion, culture, and maybe heart-- looked at black people as being "different," Following the Civil War, rabid, angry Southerners passed Jim Crow laws that effectively barred blacks from things such as voting, holding public office, eating in public places, and having their voice heard. The Klu Klux Klan, formed shortly after the end of the Civil War enforced and perpetuated the violence and prejudice, especially in the South. In 1896, Plessy vs. Ferguson, came before The Supreme Court. The highest court in the land ruled that segregation based on skin color was legal. Over the next 40-50 years, segregation justified the “separate but equal” doctrine that kept blacks under-educated and in poverty. But the 50s and 60s saw the rise of some great leaders--people who were unwilling to sit back and let the status quo remain unchallenged. Part/Paragraph 3, part 2 of the thesis statement, leaders instrumental in The Civil Rights Movement) leadership paragraph Part 4, part 3 of the thesis statement, events during The Civil Rights Movement: events paragraph Part 5, conclusion, answers the question "so what?" and analyzes the importance and impact of The Civil Rights Movement: Works Cited http://www.pbs.org/wnet/jimcrow/stories_org_kkk.html Also Avoid Pronouns: Avoid using pronouns such as I, you, we, etc. in academic essays avoid talking directly to the reader in a folksy way using filler words such as: so, okay, I think, ummm, anyways, well, etc. Develop voice using word choice and description--make it personal, not informal (save those for texting, emails, letters, etc.). A strong conclusion includes: "The conclusion (ending or closing) of your writing is what wraps it all up for the reader. Stop writing when you have said it all, but the conclusion should tie up all loose ends. Do not leave the reader hanging. Leave him/her with something to think about. Do not insult the reader by telling him/her what you have written about. Also, do not use the lead as the conclusion; you can restate what you wrote in the lead, but do not just repeat it. NEVER end with "...and it was all a dream." That has been overdone. Below are some ideas on how to write a good conclusion. Remember that not every type of lead will work for every writer or for every piece of writing. You'll have to experiment." --Kim's Korner 1) the importance of the topic/opinion 2) a sense of completeness 3) a powerful final impression Conclusion suggestions: 1) Answer the question "so what?" (why is the paper useful/meaningful) 2) Synthesize as you summarize (don't just repeat the main points. Show how the points you made were not random, but that they fit together) 3) Give your readers something to think about. If the intro was general and then you got specific, do the opposite in the conclusion--go from specific to general. 4) Create a new meaning by showing how your ideas work together and create something new (the sum of a paper is worth more than its parts :-) 5) Universalize (compare to other situations) 6) Ask a provocative question, use a quote, end with a warning, suggest results or consequences (these suggestions are not as effective as 1-5) Strategies to Avoid 1) Beginning the conclusion with an unnecessary, overused phrase such as “in conclusion,” “in summary,” or “in closing.” Although these phrases can work in speeches, they come across as wooden and trite in writing 2) Stating the thesis for the very first time in the conclusion 3) Introducing a new idea or subtopic in your conclusion 4) Ending with a rephrased thesis statement without any substantive changes 5) Making sentimental, emotional appeals that are out of character with the rest of an analytical paper 6) Including evidence (quotations, statistics, etc.) that should be in the body of the paper. 7) That's my story and I'm sticking to it--I don't care if you agree. People write this kind of conclusion when they can’t think of anything else to say--but they come across as being inflexible and narrow-minded. 8) The “Grab Bag” Conclusion. This kind of conclusion includes extra information that the writer found or thought of but couldn’t integrate into the main paper. Signaling a Conclusion (transition words) Sometimes “conclusion” words like these will help you write the conclusion of an essay. Most of the time, using the word or phrase in the middle of a sentence is better than making it the first word of the conclusion. These are not words typically used in a narrative essay--but might come in handy: in fact in conclusion for these reasons as a result of in effect altogether indeed surely clearly to sum up overall truly all in all due to obviously definitely ultimately thus in effect consequently |
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2014-2015 8th Grade Essays
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#1 About Me Essay
#2 "Beautiful" Essay
#3 Narrative Essay
#4 Essay Courage
#5 Civil Rights Essay
#6 Cheating Essay
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